Use Your Power Words: How Strategic Adjectives Level Up Nonprofit Communications and Humanize AI-Written Proposals

Carrie Ducote
5 days ago
3 min read

Updated: 4 days ago

AI can help nonprofits move faster. It can draft grant narratives, appeal emails, case statements, and reports in a fraction of the time it used to take. But speed comes with a tradeoff.

Left untouched, AI-written content often sounds generic and flat. It meets the requirements, but it does not move people. It reads like something that could belong to any organization, anywhere.

That is the exact opposite of what you want.

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The Problem: AI Writes Safely. Funders Read Emotionally.

The difference between a proposal that checks the box and one that earns real engagement often comes down to word choice, especially adjectives. Used well, they bring specificity, emotion, and credibility. Used poorly, they feel inflated or generic. This is where power words matter.

Most AI-generated nonprofit content relies on very common vocabulary: “important”, “critical”, “effective”, “successful”, or “impactful.” These words may be accurate but they also may come off as vague or even sterile.

Funders do not fund abstractions. They fund people, urgency, and outcomes.

When language is vague, it creates distance. When language is specific and human, it builds trust.

Your goal is not to make writing flowery. Your goal is to make it engaging enough to connect in a powerful, meaningful way.

The Opportunity: Adjectives Create Texture, Not Hype

Power words are not buzzwords. They are precise descriptors that help the reader picture reality.

Strong adjectives clarify scale and urgency, signal credibility and experience, convey lived impact, not just intention.

When editing AI-generated drafts, adding the right adjectives are one of the fastest and most effective levers you can pull to humanize your content.

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Actionable Strategy #1: Replace Generic Adjectives With Evidence-Based Ones

Scan your draft and highlight vague modifiers like important, innovative, comprehensive, significant or meaningful. Replace some of them with adjectives that are measurable, time-bound and experience-based.

Instead of “Our program provides important support to families.” Try: “Our program provides consistent, week-to-week support to families navigating housing instability.”

The second version gives the reader a vision; something to hold onto.

Actionable Strategy #2: Use Adjectives to Show Proximity to the Problem

Funders want to know how close you are to the work. Layer in descriptors that signal frequency, duration, intensity, conditions on the ground.

Examples:

“daily inventory pressures” instead of “high demand”
“chronically under-resourced clinics” instead of “limited resources”
“first-night crisis placements” instead of “emergency housing”

These words tell a story without editorializing.

Actionable Strategy #3: Balance Warmth With Authority

One common mistake when humanizing AI content is swinging too far into emotion and losing credibility. The strongest proposals pair human-centered language with grounded authority.

Example: Instead of “outcomes-driven program that stabilizes families" try this instead: "a trauma-informed, a compassionate, life-changing program that has measurable impact within 90 days”

Emotion invites the reader in.

Actionable Strategy #4: Edit AI Drafts in Layers, Not All at Once

Do not ask AI to “sound more human” and hope for the best. That results in it using words you would never actually use, like "fluff". Instead, treat AI as a first draft generator and then do a focused power-word pass.

Suggested editing sequence:

First pass: grammar, spelling, and overall "readability"
Second pass: insert specific adjectives where the substance of your work is thin
Third pass: remove anything that exaggerates, repeats, or doesn't add value

This keeps the writing sharp and valuable.

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Examples and Context: What This Looks Like in Practice

Grant proposals: Adjectives clarify urgency and feasibility without exceeding word limits.
Case statements: Descriptive language helps donors picture the change their dollars enable.
AI-assisted appeals: Power words transform generic gratitude into authentic appreciation.

Make the work visible. Make the stakes real. Make your value proposition clear. Make your organization stand out as different, and your solution as better.

Conclusion: Power Words Are... Powerful

AI can help you move faster but only if you can figure out how to move the people. Adjectives that heighten emotional reaction can help you do that.

Within 30 days, you can audit your most-used descriptors, replace vague language with specific, grounded modifiers and build a short internal list of “approved” power words that reflect your work.

The strongest nonprofit communications do not sound impressive. They sound true. Reach out to Phoenix Fire or join Spark to level up your writing and appeals.